Gary Halbert · whole document (81)
motherlode
It
Could Cost Me
My
Job!
A few days
ago I sent you a 12-page letter with a free audio tape scotch-taped
to the first page.
If you can make it past those two "hurdles" (writing a "killer" headline
and a captivating introduction), the next part of writing copy ought to
come more easily to you. After all, it's basically writing a story. A
story about why the customer should give you his hard-earned money.
Does your story... your "body copy"... compel the reader to continue
reading? Compare your own copy with these tidbits from my "Motherload
Collection":
I was
embarrassed. I didn't know what to do. I felt like a fool. So, what
I did was, I put a fifty dollar bill on the table, mumbled something
about how that should cover lunch... and... I got the hell out of
there. I went back to work, closed the door to my office and buried
myself in work. I didn't feel like talking to anybody, especially
Lauren.
In these
FREE video tapes and FREE reports, Halbert teaches you the right
way to use these powerful money-making weapons... plus... how to
raise money without borrowing... how to get movie and TV stars to
help you with your selling efforts... how to get free advertising...
and... many other little-known insider secrets. Here is a brief
"preview" of what you will learn when you watch these FREE tapes and
read the FREE reports:
That's the
bad news. The good news is, before closing the doors, Halbert gave a
"mini-version" of his famous "Seminar for Millionaires" and... for
the first time...
This is a
"win-win" deal for everybody. I get new subscribers to "The Gary
Halbert Letter" in the fastest way possible... and... the people
(like you) who are mailing the sales letters get both "hands-on"
experience... and... good profits! Here are the most common
questions people are asking:
Now,
I've also got to tell you that, in addition to the money you've got
to lay out for this incredible offer, you must also know there are
two "strings" attached:
STRING #1:
You must listen to all the tapes before (yadda yadda)