Gary Halbert · whole document (17)
a yellow pages
Not good enough. Let's see if we can do better. First, there is something you should remember...
Research Has Proven
People Are 5-Times
More Likely To Read
What Is (Or Appears To Be)
Editorial Matter Than
That Which Is Obviously
An Ad!
And, here is something else for you to remember...
When People Look
In The Yellow Pages
They Are Looking For
A "Solution."
In other words, when a person looks under "chiropractor", he's not only looking for a convenient doctor of chiropractic, he's also looking for a cure for his back pain, his migraine headaches, or whatever. So, let's say our relief seeker, when he gets to the section on chiropractors, not only sees all those "look-alike" ads, he also sees an "editorial" message with a headline something like this:
WARNING: Don't Call
Any Chiropractor Until
You Read This Announcement!
Or perhaps, like this:
DOES YOUR BACK HURT?
Read This Before You
Make A Mistake And
Choose The Wrong Doctor!
Or this:
ARE YOU IN PAIN? If So,
Call (000) 000-0000 And Listen
To An Amazing Free Recorded Message
That Reveals An Amazing Way
To Stop Hurting Fast!
There is one thing common about all these headlines and that is...
They All Offer
News!
Now, the copy underneath those headlines must deliver on the promise in the headline. It should inform, educate, and then finally, give a compelling reason why the reader should choose the chiropractor who has written this "announcement" instead of all the others. And... not only is the message important... the format or the "look" of the message/ad can be crucial.