Gary Halbert · whole document (17)
a yellow pages
WARNING: Don't Call
Any Chiropractor Until
You Read This Announcement!
Or perhaps, like this:
DOES YOUR BACK HURT?
Read This Before You
Make A Mistake And
Choose The Wrong Doctor!
Or this:
ARE YOU IN PAIN? If So,
Call (000) 000-0000 And Listen
To An Amazing Free Recorded Message
That Reveals An Amazing Way
To Stop Hurting Fast!
There is one thing common about all these headlines and that is...
They All Offer
News!
Now, the copy underneath those headlines must deliver on the promise in the headline. It should inform, educate, and then finally, give a compelling reason why the reader should choose the chiropractor who has written this "announcement" instead of all the others. And... not only is the message important... the format or the "look" of the message/ad can be crucial.
And, how should it look? The answer to that one is simple...
It Should Look Like
A Hot News Story
Taken Right Out A Newspaper!
WARNING: DON'T CALL
ANY CHIROPRACTOR UNTIL
YOU READ THIS!
Did you know not all chiropractors are the same?
Yes, it's true. Some chiro- practors only understand the Palmer method of spinal adjustment. While others, who are more enlightened, understand not only the Palmer method, but also, many new techniques that give a more rapid and complete relief to pain.